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Promise Heart
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Could love come in torrents
overflowing this empty heart.
Could it bring that warm wind
to secure me, and dry these tearful eyes.
Will love come again, and bring
that wanting ache, and leave me
with that promised touch,
just two hearts can make.
I hold this true
till loves reborn.
This promise heart
I`ll give, and all it holds.. Crow
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crow
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2003-07-13 13:05:00]
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Re: Promise Heart
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:13:17 PM AEST
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very beautiful I hope you find that love
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Re: Promise Heart
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by Crow on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:00:05 PM AEST
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| i`m o.k my life is pretty good. if I could just learn how to spell! I forgot an "E" that bothers me. thank you for looking Crow |
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Re: Promise Heart
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by Saira on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:10:16 PM AEST
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Another great write that touches my heart. Well done!
Saira |
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Re: Promise Heart
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:37:50 PM AEST
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Lovely write...
Jenni |
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Re: Promise Heart
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by Vampy on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 07:22:46 PM AEST
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| Very touching, and once again, beautifully written.. I really enjoy your work. |
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Re: Promise Heart
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by Alisialynn on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:23:15 AM AEST
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| Your poems are beautiful. I really enjoyed them. I am sure she is out there for you. |
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Re: Promise Heart
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:56:54 AM AEST
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Lovely write Crow and you will find her!!
michelle |
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Re: Promise Heart
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by rusty1980 on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:42:58 PM AEST
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| this was very nicely written!! |
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Re: Promise Heart
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:02:29 AM AEST
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love is such a beautiful thing, we can sometimes forget how delicate it is...your heart is full of love...my best wishes to you to find a beautiful heart to share it with...great write...take care
kara |
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Re: Promise Heart
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by Merry on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:53:16 AM AEST
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well done - a man who can talk about his heart - now that's special -
merry |
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