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I Hope You Enjoy The View...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im not sure if you're listening
Yet still my heart it calls
Though only the stars are watching
Maybe you heard the fall
All about my rain drenched body
Spill the tears, from deep within
So warm and yet they burn my face
My heart has known your sin
Only moonlight sees me lying here
There's no tender songs embrace
All I have,is all I feel
And this pain I can't erase
In waiting,I was faithful
In loving you,I was free
So why did you take away my smiles
And leave me in misery
Crippled by the agony
All I can do is shed my tears
I'm so ashamed and deeply mamed
For ever relaxing all my fears
I believed in all your whispers
Your touch opened up my soul
Yet now I stand,once more cheated
On the edge of a lonely hole
Deep into its darkness
I peer between my tears
Watching as they fall and leave
Till no more drops appear
For if this be my fate
To be ever lost in pain
Then I will cry all by myself
With no help from love again
Hear me as I die a little
Taste the torment in my heart
Watch as the love I thought was mine
Tear my soul apart
No,do not say a word
This is mine and mine alone
Just watch me from your happiness
A place I've never known
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-07-13 07:05:00]
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Re: I Hope You Enjoy The View...
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 09:01:45 AM AEST
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wonderful as all your writes are...I am a big fan
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Re: I Hope You Enjoy The View...
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 10:32:17 AM AEST
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| I think you stole the words from my heart ... and I cried big tears when I read this ... thank you for posting this - such a wonderful poem that says everything I feel ... Jan |
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Re: I Hope You Enjoy The View...
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:35:41 PM AEST
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| oh sharon this is so moving!! the ending just about stopped my heart!! huggers n' love nessa |
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Re: I Hope You Enjoy The View...
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by Crow on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 08:50:41 PM AEST
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| just beautiful, and i agree the ending just melts my heart. Crow |
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Re: I Hope You Enjoy The View...
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by Chuckx on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 10:43:55 PM AEST
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This poem hurts...my heart aches again remembering through your poem.
chuck. |
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Re: I Hope You Enjoy The View...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 12:29:50 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful, Whispers....
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