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Message to cutters part two....
Contributed by
karoody
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Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
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you think i don't understand....
.but it is you who has the wrong perception....
.i have cut, swallowed pills
and then i had to watch very dear friends commit suicide
families crushed
suicide is a permanent fix to a temporary problem
and yes, i do feel it's selfish
sorry...guess it's not your opinion....
i never meant to step on anyone's toes
just wish you people would wake up and see that life has more to it.
ok one of you said you stopped when the situation ended
what if you had died??? you would have never seen your life better
and someone who loved you would be heartbroken
because they knew it gets better and you didn't
i know sadness
i know loneliness
my soul aches more times than not these days
but i remember brighter days and i know i will find more
yes life isn't friendly life can be cruel
and no i don't want anyone to trade health!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are reading the work of a bleedin heart that wants to cure the world
of all sadness sickness and violence
but human nature and the cycle of life says no...so sorry i can't help you
and if that makes you want to kill yourself...please come kill me
because you just made me a murderer
and guess what...my heart goes out to you even though you apparently wanna spit on me
i fear for your tortutred soul
i send a message wisshing you to choose life for yourself and you attack me....
i have never been so hurt or insulted by anyone....
and i appreciate the compliments but unfortunately....
my mission is offically in vain
because my goal is to make people smile....
and i failed horribly with my strongest message of all to you....
if you people do not like my opinions that much
please say the word and you will never see my poetry ever again
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-07-13 05:35:00]
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:50:45 AM AEST
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| a powerful poem. i did not misunderstand your first poem as it was obvious that your message was meant only with good intentions. i am also a recovering cutter and i hope that everyone who suffers in any way can find happiness and strength in life. excellent poem and a thought provoking message, well done. Kate x |
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by kangarose on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:05:34 AM AEST
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hi karoody,
people here can get very offended at things its true but don't let just a meer hand full stop you from posting here... hold up your strengths and stay strong in your beliefs
chrissylee |
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:59:21 AM AEST
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| love you kara and i mean this, you have only just come home, please stay, your voice is needed here, welcome always, your heart and name are pure, your soul sweet, your heart kind, big hugs and love, nessa xx |
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by karoody on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 07:36:48 AM AEST
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yes, i just came home....and i intend to stay...guess i had to make a noisy entrance...lol...you know, i wrote this as i was leaving and wanted to get it on site then, because i feared that someone i cared for here was about to do it for good...but i didn't get it up then...i hope she's ok...and i hope i am reaching you guys in time to save your souls from this torture...
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 08:24:59 AM AEST
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| Well..you already know my views on your last poem to the cutters.I expressed my support for your good intentions both on poem and through PM.I like a person with the courage to speak out.I admire your strength,so please stay strong and keep your beliefs...It would be a sad day to have such an honest and straightforward poet leave this home.Its a pity more dont say what they think,rather they say what they think others want to hear..This too can be a problem with suicidals...Sometimes hard love is the key. ***BRAVO*** to you Kara...(((huggers))) |
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 09:23:17 AM AEST
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I agree i believe i did misunderstand your last poem by saying that you dont understand...i apologise for that and i have also admitted that i am selfish *shrugs*
Great write, very well expressed
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:28:20 PM AEST
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| i don't think i misunderstood your last poem and i know the intentions were good...and it was a very good poem...i guess the truth hurts which is why people got upset...please don't go or anything, you are a talented writer and a wonderful person and will be missed... |
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by Crow on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 08:41:11 PM AEST
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i read your first entry, you stick to your beliefs
and stay onboard. Crow |
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by venkat on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 03:32:10 AM AEST
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| Those who attacked you do not read this poem..I am sorry to observe that you have faced many troubles and undergone so much heart break...cool down my friend.. venkat |
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Re: Message to cutters part two....
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:44:51 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry you felt attacked, for that's not what I meant to do. I never saw this one when it first came out. That parts directed at me for my comment on the first poem, isn't it? The part about "ok one of you said you stopped when the situation ended
what if you had died???"...................... I know. I've thought about that all the time, now. But now's too late. I can't change my past. I almost did die, and at that point in time, I would have been very happy...... but now? Now..... I know.... I would have missed the best part of my life. I know what you are saying. And your message didn't fail. It stopped my sister. And for that I thank you deeply.
Good write.
Jaime |
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