|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
no title
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
|
too far gone
too late found
these years, a waste
chasing what cannot be caught
i found the perfect place to hide
but you, you *****, were already inside
i've watched you change
and i can't stop you
and i can't stop myself
from changing too
can't figure out
whate the ***** happened to you
two, then one, now two again
it wasn't supposed to happen to us
our paths are parting
and it's hard to say goodbye
the path before you is long and fulfilling
but dangerous
but, i know you are strong
i still believe in you
my path is short
a Dead End
drenched in blood
i can already hear their screams
i've become so bitter
and so have you
i guess it's all that could be expected
this is all that's left you see
the end of us, the end of me
the gateway to your destiny
i self-destruct and you are set free
now that you are free to fly
i hope you soar beyond the stars
and i hope i get a glimpse of you
before i fall too far
and i hope, before i hit the ground,
you smile, one last time, at me
so that my heart will be at peace
when i reach my destiny
when i set my blood free
Copyright ©
Cancer
... [
2003-07-12 22:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: no title
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:52:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hey, Roy good to read one of your amazing masterpieces once again after a few weeks although I hope the message isn't true just try and write it all out and live for yer wife and kid. I wish I could do more man. Once again I loved this.
Bobo (Joel) |
|
|
Re: no title
(User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:15:14 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
powerful, emotive and deeply tragic. there's always such raw emotion in your poetry.
i love the lines, "and i hope i get a glimpse of you / before i fall too far" - a beautiful sentiment. think hard on this matter my friend. Kate x
|
|
|
Re: no title
(User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is incredible...i too hope that you will think hard before you do anything...you have a lot to live for, although it might not seem like it... |
|
|
Re: no title
(User Rating: 1 )
by WiL_CA on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:52:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| the last verse is incredible, good job |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
