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this night

Contributed by fallensilence on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

this night has a hold of me
black is the sky above me
a stillness. the moment when
i can see the slightly grey clouds
travel their journey.
i find myself longing to be the same
(with somewhere to go)
and like i cloud i can only take in so
much before i darken and erupt.

this night wont let go of me
the moon is low enough so i can
whisper secrets in her ear
white is the star thats caught my gaze
while a gentle breeze blows my hair aside

this night seems endless to me
every moment draws me in asking me
to hold onto it forever, had i forever to waste
one million nights and they all look the same
one million days and im going insane

with a sigh in my heart im sure that you're as bored as me.
you're useless unless im useful.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-07-12 21:35:00]
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Re: this night (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:30:38 AM AEST
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i love the way you can create visual images with simple words and phrases. my favourite lines are 'every moment draws me in asking me / to hold onto it forever, had i forever to waste'. another excellent write with a cryptic ending, Kate x

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