|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Dances In The Moonlight
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
In the iridescent moonlight
They take my hand
The soft, enchanting melodies
Blur what I think I understand
Each taking turns
They twirl me around
I’m like a ballerina
In a black satin gown
They whisper things of long ago
As we dance around the starlight
They remind of times lost in my memories
As they sing their sweet song of my demise
They wrap me in their trance
As they fill my head with sorrow
They know the nightmares they’ve caused me
No sleep for me tomorrow
But all this they do not care
They just want to hear me scream, see me fight
As I dance with the demons of my past
In the iridescent moonlight
Copyright ©
wild_heart_of_fire
... [
2003-07-12 19:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Dances In The Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 09:42:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I have never read pain expressed in such an eloquent manner before this is a wonderful write
Shari |
|
|
Re: Dances In The Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:05:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| You held my eyes with the imagery and stirred my soul with your words..Excellent!! |
|
|
Re: Dances In The Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 11:25:27 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
goodness! this really works. very good work
i like this Crow |
|
|
Re: Dances In The Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:27:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| excellent!! hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: Dances In The Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dr_Calm on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:59:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Really excellent! A beautiful write!
Jeffrey |
|
|
Re: Dances In The Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Aahhh this is such a wonderful write ... Jan |
|
|
Re: Dances In The Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:44:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is amazing and sad and beautiful at the same time...i love it... |
|
|
Re: Dances In The Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:44:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
geez riki~can u never do anything wrong? Once again, a beautiful write, much luv twin!
Lisa |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
