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IT'S OVER!
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
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Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It’s over, it’s over, it’s over.
It’s only been a dream.
I dreamed about her nightly,
As if she were my queen.
It’s time for me to turn around
And plant my feet on firmer ground.
She had me in clouds so high in the air.
To be plunging down just doesn’t seem fair.
She threw me right back in the water,
Each time that she removed the hook.
She knew she could always re-land me,
With her smile and her voice and her look.
This trout grows increasingly weary,
Of the struggle uphill in her stream.
The only smart thing to be doing,
Is to swim back where I already have been.
It’s over, it’s over, it’s over.
I’ll darken her pond nevermore.
The only way to be free now,
Is to cross on to a different shore.
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Re: IT'S OVER!
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 09:57:20 PM AEST
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good write and it sounds like you made a good decision
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Re: IT'S OVER!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 03:10:04 AM AEST
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Good one, Rob...lovely use of metaphors..
Glad to see you writing again....hope all is well...
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Re: IT'S OVER!
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by Saira on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:59:55 PM AEST
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Great write!
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