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In the Closet
Contributed by
SeXyDrAgOn
on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Their is a dark hole in there
I
Fell
Into
It
But I've covered it up
Hidden it from the world
He's in there
I
Saw
Him
There
But he didn't let me out
He got me with great ease
That door is normally locked
I
Think
He
Has
The
Key
He used to take me down there
He
Hurt
Me
Down
There
But no one ever saw it
The lights were always dimmed
No one heard me scream
I
SCREAMED
AND
SCREAMED
But silent screams aren't heard
You have to look for their faces
Mommy never saw what they looked like
She
Never
Went
Down
There
No one ever found the hole
I had to keep them safe
I couldn't let him get them
I
Was
The
Sacrifice
There's a light in my closet too
There's a rope, to turn it on
He
Turns
It
Off
He gets me in the dark
Then he keeps me there
He
Hurts
Me
There
Sometimes I think I can get that key
I think i can reach the rope
Just
A
Little
Further
He can't get me in the light
He says I make him happy
But the darkness makes me sad
Get
The
Rope
Get
The
Rope
Then I found it, I have the key
I can reach the rope!
I
See
The
Light
Mommy said there were no monsters
She said not to be afraid
I
Can
Touch
Her
Tears
She's scared; She sees the hole
She can see my screams
She
Can't
See
Me
She sees the dark hole in my closet
She believes in monsters now
She
Left
Him
She keeps the lights on
He
Can't
Get
me
Copyright ©
SeXyDrAgOn
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2003-07-12 13:35:00]
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Re: In the Closet
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 01:47:01 PM AEST
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ooooooo...what a powerful poem! so sad! hits close to home. you wrote it wonderfully. i like the style. you have wonderful talent. thank you for this poem.
Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: In the Closet
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:05:05 PM AEST
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very good write, sent chills, something parents have to look for ..
Shari |
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Re: In the Closet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:07:40 AM AEST
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| you have a way with wors and your poetry it very touching! it's very cmplicated and unique you are a very talented writer! really great form to write it in great choice! |
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Re: In the Closet
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by Trisha on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:29:14 PM AEST
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| I like this and it's really good |
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Re: In the Closet
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by vincy on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:05:14 AM AEST
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I can tell you are a creative person
the format, presentation of this poem
caught my eye, you're on to something.
I would dig deeper, explore this style.
there's merit here. |
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Re: In the Closet
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by tinka_belle on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:36:24 AM AEST
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oh my god
i um dont know what to say
this is so real
its like u were there like watching or something listing to the voices in my head
'cept u can write them down
whereas i cant yet
coz i still cant reach the rope
turn on the light
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