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Untitled
Contributed by
MrWrite
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Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm lost in this world.
I try and find something,
I can never find it.
I try and go somewhere,
and I never get there.
Is there something
wrong with me?
It seems like I can't
do anything right.
I have to push on.
Have to find purpose
for my life.
Have to keep
the hope alive.
Have to keep
my pain inside.
Copyright ©
MrWrite
... [
2003-07-12 12:05:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by KittyGurl on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 06:04:22 PM AEST
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| A really good "think to yourself poem." Very nicely written. |
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Re: Untitled
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by nightrider on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:21:03 PM AEST
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| so easy to be so lost... its amazing how confused one person can be, isnt it? i know how you feel, at least to some extent... anyway, great write, and i DID enjoy it, thanks... |
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Re: Untitled
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by Saira on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 06:02:44 PM AEST
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Wow! A great write haven't read in a long time. Enjoyed it a lot! Keep them coming.
Saira
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