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Sitting In A Booth
Contributed by
Dr_Calm
on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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They were sitting in a booth at Pizza Hut,
Lunch was on the table, and love was in their eyes.
Snow was on the ground, and the clouds hid the sun,
Is this the one they thought, after so many tries?
While calm on the outside, thoughts were flying fast,
Is he what I hoped for? Is she what she seems?
Could this be my knight in armor, willing to rescue me?
Have I finally wakened, and found the lady of my dreams?
They pause and they wonder, is this to good to be true?
Many questions, doubts, and fears cross their minds.
They have walked in the dark, for so long a time,
It seemed like forever, their eyes would remain blind.
Each has been burned by the flames of lost love,
Both believed that those flames had left a scar,
That passion and love and caring could never penetrate,
The wounds so close, and the feelings so far.
And there they sat, so afraid and yet so brave,
Willing to grasp the feelings that brought them pain,
Wondering and doubting and betting on the chance,
Their passion will be rewarded, no longer under restrain.
So on this dreary afternoon, with its sky so gray,
A very special bond has formed, never to be cut,
Will they ever realize how their lives changed while,
They were sitting in a booth at Pizza Hut?
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Dr_Calm
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2003-07-12 03:05:00]
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Re: Sitting In A Booth
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 04:42:14 AM AEST
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I really like this. I enjoyed reading it. It's fulla emotion and stuff...
Thanks for sharing this couple's Pizza Hut experiance... kinda taught me something about love.
*J* |
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Re: Sitting In A Booth
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 05:36:36 AM AEST
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| ohhh this is great! love the details and images, what a dear write, im a pizza hut writer too, use the napkins lol, always wondered who else did it... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Sitting In A Booth
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 05:50:22 AM AEST
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| Oh... I love to people watch!! :) Well...not like a pervert does lol..but you know what I mean..and this is awesome.It was like I was there watching too.I really like your way of sitting at pizza hut and writing...very very cool **huge smiles** |
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Re: Sitting In A Booth
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:46:36 AM AEST
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very well written, enjoyable
Shari |
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Re: Sitting In A Booth
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by Crow on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 05:25:50 PM AEST
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| very good write, i`ve never thought to take pad and pen when i`m out in the world. Crow |
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Re: Sitting In A Booth
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 03:15:29 AM AEST
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This poem is beautiful. I too like to watch people and wonder what their are thinking. I also never leave my house with out my poetry notebook and a pen. Very enjoyable read.
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