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The Heart Is a Lonely Place...
Contributed by
BlackRoses00
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Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The heart is a lonely place…
A place of solitude;
And broken dreams lost in space.
A space in which the heart protrudes,
Upon a surface of tattered lace.
It’s vain attempt to be pretty.
Within a heart so lonely,
Lives a pain born of such lies,
A carousel; riding a painted pony.
Listen to the harsh, dead cries,
Realizing that life itself is phony,
As phony as blood within the vein.
Lonely within a crowded, faceless room,
The heart betrays to its own misery.
With such intensity leaving the weak to swoon,
The hate filled shrieks provide advisory.
They dust away the emptiness with a broom,
And the heart is a lonely place.
-Joey-
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BlackRoses00
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2003-07-11 21:35:00]
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Re: The Heart Is a Lonely Place...
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 09:55:14 PM AEST
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well done
Shari |
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Re: The Heart Is a Lonely Place...
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 10:00:01 PM AEST
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amazing...i really can't say anything else. -david
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Re: The Heart Is a Lonely Place...
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by TeenageEmoGirl on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 02:30:24 AM AEST
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| I realllllly like this and you have much talented...i liked how u didnt have a typical rhyme scheme- this poem is one of my favs on the site :) |
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Re: The Heart Is a Lonely Place...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 02:39:26 AM AEST
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Wow... that's awfully, um, gloomy... well written though. Sad, miserable, lonely... but well done. Smile. =)
~ Moonlit |
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Re: The Heart Is a Lonely Place...
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by BlackRoses00 on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 03:25:14 AM AEST
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| thank you for the kind comment. |
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Re: The Heart Is a Lonely Place...
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 05:19:49 AM AEST
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| well done:) hugs n' love nessa |
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