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hungry?
Contributed by
princesspurty
on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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are you hungry? wanna grab a bite?
we'll dine by faded loves light
order two plates keep them full
got to eat up on this bad love gone cruel
you say your thirsty and need a drink
how about one made from foolish pride? you think?
all done and ready to go?
tip the waitress, oh wait she knows
for she has seen and served us all
the love hungry are the biggest payers of all
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2003-07-11 19:35:00]
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Re: hungry?
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 09:24:01 PM AEST
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i liked this write a lot
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Re: hungry?
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 11:24:35 PM AEST
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| I am a fan of imagery this is good what separates it from the chaff is the painfull twinge of truth |
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Re: hungry?
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by TeenageEmoGirl on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 02:35:33 AM AEST
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OH my, i think i have found a new favorite poem...this is simply GREAT, i love how you kind of took a sarcastic take on the pain---this poem kicks butt....and i can def. understand where you are coming from on this...U have much talent
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Re: hungry?
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 04:52:11 AM AEST
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| very good images........but sooo sad.......... hugs n' love nessa |
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