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Reflections
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fragments of silver, strewn broken on the floor
She sees hurt, pain, fear
Reflections, in their millions
Eyes, pleading, in their trillions
Silver glass, a fading tear
Everything she'd ever dreamt of
Lost, disappearing down the cracks
Reflections, in their millions
Eyes, weeping, in their trillions
Her heart, her mind, gone white-grey-black
Falling, stumbling over her existence
Sadness, pouring from her soul
Reflections, in their millions
Eyes, empty, in their trillions
Cold inside, as the shattered mirror before her
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Re: Reflections
(User Rating: 1 ) by fallensilence on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 09:12:52 PM AEST (User
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you expressed your feelings very well here and i enjoyed reading it. -david |
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Re: Reflections
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 10:07:03 PM AEST (User
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very good write, you showed your feelings vividly
Shari |
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Re: Reflections
(User Rating: 1 ) by krystal on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:34:25 AM AEST (User
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this is so painful yet so beautiful at the same time. An excellent write and well enjoyed. |
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