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Looking Back at Me
Contributed by
lostinlimbo
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Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Our eyes meet with tears
We wince away in fear
I look once more and see
You frowning right back at me
"Go away!" I yell at you
And you mock me with the same pain too
We growl and hiss and snarl
Yet we watch each other with sorrow
Then finally I've had enough
Our fists connect so rough
And the glass shatters..
And it doesn't matter..
Because I'll never call your bluff
This blood on our fists won't be enough
So I crumble to the floor
And sob as I look once more
Through a broken bloodied window
I see that I will never grow
For the one with the tainted frown
Is the person that I am
The person that I'll be
And the person looking back at me
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2003-07-11 16:05:00]
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Re: Looking Back at Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 04:19:13 PM AEST
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| sad poem, but it makes a social comment, I like these poems because it makes it harder to ignore that people do feel this way, dam well done |
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Re: Looking Back at Me
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 03:31:35 AM AEST
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"And the glass shatters..
And it doesn't matter.."
Love how that part sounds in my head! Great job. =)
~ Moonlit |
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