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She May Not Return At All
Contributed by
norm
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Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The mockingbird sings
in the forest at night
The dove sings
in the morning light
My love will return
when the birds take flight
or she'll never return at all.
If she doesn't return
my heart will yearn
I'll be forced to take shelter
after I learn
where my problem lies
In women's eyes
'cause she'll never return at all.
Let's face the fact
I'm lacking in tact
Not all that I lack
Is strung on a rack
I may never know
wherever to go
To make her return in the fall.
I told you the tale
No wonder I fail
I'm willing to hail
A swift monorail
to take me to her
wherever she be
She may never return at all.
Listen, my darling
you sure ken your own
I gave of myself
muscle and tone,
I gave my beloved
my heart and my head,
If she doesn't return I'll be dead.
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-07-11 08:05:00]
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 08:14:21 AM AEST
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 08:23:06 AM AEST
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I like the imagery you used in the first 2 verses I can feel the passion you feel for your love and despair it brings, very good poem.
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 09:22:01 AM AEST
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| If the day is to be truly yours,then so too like the dove,your love will return..But if you want to forget my poetic B.S lol..I say Run!! run after her..tell her how you feel...hold her in your arms and take her home :) |
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 10:40:53 AM AEST
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Ahhhhhh Norm how could she not return to such a sweet man??Lovely
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 02:27:48 PM AEST
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| norm, im with sharon on this one lol.. beautiful write! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by Crow on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 05:27:18 PM AEST
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go for her, you always wonder what if.
good write Crow |
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by Saira on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 06:05:17 PM AEST
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Hope she returns to you. Very beautiful poem.
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by kangarose on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 11:20:50 PM AEST
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you cetainly know how to put your heart and sould into a poem..... i have longed for a man that knows how to express himself... most men just don't know how... but you do know how and i hope in time she comes to realize this.....
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Re: She May Not Return At All
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 02:13:10 AM AEST
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Aww this is precious...loved it
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