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Walking Through The Dark
Contributed by
Dr_Calm
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Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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I walk outside and feel the wind blow,
But yet, the leaves are silent,
My eyes are transfixed,
By all that can be seen,
Yet neither the moon or the sun,
Lights my path
Darkness surrounds me,
I have vision, and I don’t stumble,
Moving with great care,
Forward I must go!
The path back to where I came,
Is known, and worn, and easy,
The path toward the unknown,
Is new, and unfamiliar, and,
Full of danger and risk,
So, with my eyes focused,
On the foggy path that lays ahead,
One foot of stone steps ahead of the other,
My feet follow my minds edict,
Move forward!
Discover what is hidden in the fog!
Soon, you will hear the rustle of the leaves,
And feel the warmth of the sun, on your face.
Copyright ©
Dr_Calm
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2003-07-10 11:05:00]
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:12:40 PM AEST
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beautiful words to a beautiful poem. wonderful write.
Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:20:57 PM AEST
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wonderful write
Shari |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:27:39 PM AEST
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Beautiful! Welcome to YPDC Glad you joined!
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by norm on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 04:02:36 PM AEST
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Nice write
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To move out of the dark
and into the light
if only you'll do it
Makes everything right... |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Daydreamer on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 05:20:51 PM AEST
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| This was a good write...It gives people something to think about when they have probs in life. Good write I enjoyed it `day` |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Vampy on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 09:30:15 PM AEST
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| This was *very* beautifully written... put together well, and has a great message. |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 10:48:01 PM AEST
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| ~:*beautiful!!*:~ hugs n' love to you, nessa |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Dr_Calm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 12:19:00 AM AEST
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Riki,
Thank you for taking a couple of moments to read and comment on "Walking Through The Dark". I will try and keep an eye out for some of your work to check out.
Jeffrey |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Dr_Calm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 12:22:21 AM AEST
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Shari,
Thanks, as always for checking out the poem. I actually wrote it 3 or 4 weeks ago. As I check out some of the titles and poems on here....there just seems to be very little optimism sometimes.
Take care,
Jeffrey |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Dr_Calm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 12:26:06 AM AEST
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Christina,
Thank you for taking a few moments to read and comment on my poem. I saw in your profile where poetry is more than just a hobby to you.
I will keep an eye open for some of your work
to check out.
Thanks again,
Jeffrey |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Dr_Calm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 12:27:13 AM AEST
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Thanks for taking a few moments to read and comment on my poem.
Jeffrey |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Dr_Calm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 12:29:01 AM AEST
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Vampy,
I just wanted to thank you for taking a few moments to read and comment on my poem. I have only been writing for about a year and a half, and your kind words will keep me encouraged.
Thanks again,
Jeffrey |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Dr_Calm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 12:33:11 AM AEST
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Nessa,
Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment on "Walking Through The Dark". I have to admit, I checked out your profile, so your words of encouragement carry a little extra weight, as far as I am concerned.
Thanks again.
Jeffrey
P.S. If I recall your profile correctly, it said you are an author. I was wondering what types of things you write. (If that is prying too much, please forgive me and ignore the question).
J. |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 01:08:52 AM AEST
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welcome to ypdc!! great job on this write and Ill be looking for more.
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Dr_Calm on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 01:50:21 AM AEST
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Michelle,
Thanks for taking a few minutes to read and comment on my poem. I will be looking for your work, so I cancheck it out!
Jeffrey |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Crow on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 03:18:44 AM AEST
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sound advice, good write
Crow |
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 03:04:09 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Walking Through The Dark
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:49:53 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this...
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