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Contributed by
jake
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Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Why are you so blind?
You look and never find
Searching day by day,
eyes closed to the way.
How can you not see?
It seems so plan to me.
What you need is here.
You are full of fear.
Well you ever open your eyes?
Quck or the moment dies.
You only get one chance.
It is time for the dance.
Copyright ©
jake
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2003-07-10 09:35:00]
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Re: No Title
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by Daydreamer on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 05:26:06 PM AEST
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| This was a good poem. It sucks when you wonder through life with closed eyes to all the beauty it has to offer for fear you'll see the bad. I hope people who live in fear open their eyes to see the beauty that is out there. `day` |
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 01:11:17 AM AEST
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This poem is so wonderful and very true. As far as a title goes sometimes the mystery of the untitled poem always catches me.
michelle |
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:14:04 PM AEST
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| sometimes you blink and you miss the moment. very well write and great way of expressing that sense of lost time. |
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