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A knew revolution
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
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Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
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Its time for war
With this knew revolution
Wonder what its for
Its our future resolutions
Wonder whats in store
For the future evolutions
Another freaking war
To pay our restitutions
Cause all we want is more
For our kids's intuitions
But when you count the score
It is us that are the victims
Not the rich but us the poor
We'll never beat the systems
So lets all end this freaking war
There are no good intentions
Join my society
You only have to try it
Only one priority
And that is just to riot
Theres only one way to be free
Now why you want to buy it
The govenment wont let it be
The system we must fry it
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2003-07-09 20:35:00]
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Re: A knew revolution
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 01:29:19 AM AEST
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Im growing tired of the wars also, I dont want to rise up against it because that will only cause more turmoil. I just want my loved ones all back home. I wont get into any firther discussion on thsi topic because I get in trouble lol. Nice write on a touchy subject however
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Re: A knew revolution
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 08:10:35 AM AEST
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| I do like this alot like George Orwell said "governments can tolerate moral opposition until the cows come home, they FEAR phyiscal opposition", interestin metre to it aswell |
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Re: A knew revolution
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:26:21 PM AEST
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| i think you need to find another word for freaking or just leave it out. but it makes the whole poem look i dont know, childish, when its thought and message are so much higher. i liked all the poem except that. nice. |
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