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Black Day
Contributed by
ArdRi79
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Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
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Black Day
I want to make one epic monument
to my love that will last forever
a monolithic testement to my lover
I breathe the cool air,
walk in the sunshine
let the traffic envelope me
and sweep me away
it is the blackest day of my life
I love you till I die
and I die 100 times
every second I think of you
I grip this nettle life handed us
the pain is all I have of you
and you dont deserve to be forgotten
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ArdRi79
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2003-07-09 19:35:00]
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Re: Black Day
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 08:13:22 PM AEST
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bittersweet
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Re: Black Day
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:47:42 AM AEST
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| wow, well done:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Black Day
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 03:22:10 PM AEST
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| incredible... |
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Re: Black Day
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 09:43:15 AM AEST
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| Wow. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: Black Day
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 01:18:06 PM AEST
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Yes, bittersweet I would say!! Also another masterpiece!!!
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