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i dont know of one
Contributed by
plous
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Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
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i slam in some wrong,
something said that now cant be undone,
like i pulled a trigger,
something going under,
never to be given back,
my old style, something better,
not with a wheel i turn,
something week and not abstract,
not capable of such,
its blur but to be cute i use it as a crutch,
should i wright about love or light,
like a magnet to a moth,
trying to escape this world,
with your own flavor,
never deal but with words,
like burnt flesh of a baby,
could right a poem about it maybe,
a soaked tree floating around,
like a spunge due to composition,
is that all to be,
some kind of weak socio psycho group profile,
like streets that name themselves death,
its a cold and evil world,
lets not forget we are forgiven until death,
its a nice trip,
like getting hit and makeing bloody spit,
its like peter with the sword,
to bad my middle name is matthew,
so i would fit for t.v,
this makes me sick,
but like i crutch i look to be free,
something twisting inside me,
make this for good,
flipping out,
tops are turning girl can i be your clown,
maybe even you could fancy me,
socialist agnostic's cannot be free,
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plous
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Re: i dont know of one
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 05:47:09 PM AEST
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Interesting mind you have.The wording is
very vivid. So must your mind be!
:::::chills::::::::
Angel always......godspeed! joni :-) |
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Re: i dont know of one
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 06:42:05 PM AEST
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you lost me on this one somewhere near the middle..but what I sortof understood was pretty good
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Re: i dont know of one
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 07:52:47 PM AEST
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Chris,
this is a good read... I love poems that are abstract like this... leaves alot to the mind. And those last three lines...wow... Great job.
Dani |
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Re: i dont know of one
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 11:18:57 PM AEST
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MMM This was one I had to read 2 times!
Still very good but a little vivid to me!
Christina |
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Re: i dont know of one
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 01:32:28 AM AEST
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interesting write
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Re: i dont know of one
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by tease_whizz on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:43:50 AM AEST
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| this reminded me of some of the stuff i've written recently - just a flow of thoughts but with a lot of depth and meaning beyond the abstract form and content. you might enjoy my poem 'mind in motion'. keep writing, Kate x |
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