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PROMISE
Contributed by
crow
on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Diamond blue raged across the the horizon,
lighting tears through darkened clouds.
The promise made,
one soul in life to join another.
A love that binds, one has gone
two hearts the price till joined again
silent he stands amidst the storm.
Countless tears yet to be cried,
when he dreams those memories
of good and bad.
All the laughter, the secrets
passion of two souls,
he kneels now with all these thoughts
to place the flowers on her grave....Crow
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2003-07-09 10:35:00]
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Re: PROMISE
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by JamesHowlett on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 10:50:20 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. Keep writing. |
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Re: PROMISE
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 10:51:47 AM AEST
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touching write.
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Re: PROMISE
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 11:06:18 AM AEST
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Wonderful write
Shari |
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Re: PROMISE
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by PhantomsLDY on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 01:19:10 PM AEST
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| So beautiful but so sad at the same time. |
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Re: PROMISE
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:34:40 AM AEST
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| oh this is so beautiful, vivid, sad, loving, longing, wishes, misses and remembered kisses, an excellent poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: PROMISE
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:50:26 AM AEST
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awwwwwwwwwwwww......soooooo sad! awwwww...i love love love it! *sniffles* this is great..write more! encore!
Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: PROMISE
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 06:19:39 PM AEST
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This poem is beautiful and wonderfully written. I love it.
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Re: PROMISE
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by norm on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 04:52:54 PM AEST
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If we think of our mates
having gone with the fates,
A sadness pervades
You cannot replace
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