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Don't Forget To Tan
Contributed by
2timesX
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Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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there was this girl a while ago,
who was too shy to say hello.
a gallent young man,
saw her trying to tan,
and stabbed her ***** heart out.
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2003-07-09 09:35:00]
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Re: Don't Forget To Tan
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 02:36:17 PM AEST
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| eeerrr yeh....ok....afriad you lost me |
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Re: Don't Forget To Tan
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 02:36:44 PM AEST
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| afriad = afraid (duhhhh) |
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Re: Don't Forget To Tan
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:37:10 AM AEST
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| Hey this is flatlandbob1. I know I told you this already about this poem, but now you are getting a comment. You are waiting for someone special to come to you, but you are worried that they will only hurt you, hence the "stabbed her ***** heart out". You are the girl tanning. Maybe even this has happened to you to, metaphorically speaking of course. |
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