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Transparent
Contributed by
JessiAnnie
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Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Transparent
Seeing through you, to the real you
Raw feelings saved for me
Nothing’s hidden from my naked eye
Silent and solitary, through the night you cry
Clear
Nobody can see tears in the dark
It’s your selfishness that doesn’t allow
Others to see that you’re real
Silent and solitary, through the night you cry
Black
The secrets you keep, deep and dark
Locked inside you, in places nobody knows exist
Only I know, because I have them too
Silent and solitary, through the night we cry
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JessiAnnie
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2003-07-08 20:05:00]
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Re: Transparent
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:09:35 PM AEST
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very well done, I have been there this touched me deeply
Shari |
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Re: Transparent
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by liveindreams on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:02:14 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem. i felt i could relate much to it. very good. keep writing |
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