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Somewhere To Come Home To
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I should've been in love with what I saw today
But you erased every possible smile off my face
And you complain when I complain because of what I did
And you don't understand that that's the last thing I need
Or maybe you just don't care
Whenever I feel down all you do is make it worse
No matter what I need from you, you give me the reverse
When I'm upset all I want is somebody to hold me
Just love me, understand me, and completely accept me
But you don't do that at all
This place is beautiful and I don't want to go home
I have no worries here and I can freely roam
It has everything I need to make me feel like myself
And even you can just relax and be yourself
And there's nothing I want more
I'm surrounded here by so many things I love
The Divine is all around, below and above
And you know that I'll come back for all the things I'll miss
I could never leave them forever even for this bliss
But the ocean beckons me
No matter what, I know you love me and we're meant to be
I have to say this is the only place I just feel free
Now I know this is where I wanna make my life with you
The peace I feel is real and it's the only thing I know is true
It's somewhere to come home to
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
... [
2003-07-08 18:05:00]
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Re: Somewhere To Come Home To
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 07:40:32 PM AEST
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| oh wow !! i have happy tears for you!! thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem and your sense of peace that has touched my heart!! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Somewhere To Come Home To
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:36:59 PM AEST
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very beautiful, near the water is I am always at home..much joy to both of you
shari |
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Re: Somewhere To Come Home To
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 03:00:28 AM AEST
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this is beautiful good luck to you it sounds like the begining of a great adventure.
michelle |
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Re: Somewhere To Come Home To
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 12:57:57 PM AEST
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Vancouver Islands had the same effect on me when I visited a few years ago... didn't wanna leave.... so I know how you feel.
Great write. |
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Re: Somewhere To Come Home To
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by Emmie74 on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 03:16:10 AM AEST
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You better damn well come back to see me every once in a while!! : P
Always,
Emmie |
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Re: Somewhere To Come Home To
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 05:16:09 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Moonlit... all the best to you and your b/f..
Jenni |
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Re: Somewhere To Come Home To
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by yellow_sundragon on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 03:53:50 AM AEST
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I'm glad you found a place to call home.... but you betta come to the mainland and visit me, damn it! One of the reason's I'm coming home is to be closer to you!
I love this poem, and I'm happy for you, but do I sense some undertures? The first half is angry, the second so peaceful...
*J* |
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Re: Somewhere To Come Home To
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:23:01 PM AEST
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Awww this is sooo beautiful! I'm happy for you :)
- Becca |
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