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Till I've Lost You
Contributed by
eyesrustedshut
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Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Look at you, looking at me
What happened to the days we were free
The times in life when it all made sense
Now all the good times are mentioned in past tense
With unbreakable ropes our quarrels bind us
The demons we lost knew right where to find us
But until our swing breaks in the park
and your hands not in mine when we're out in the dark
I'll kiss your eyelids and touch your face
Till wer'e no longer we, if that be the case
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2003-07-08 16:05:00]
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Re: Till I've Lost You
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by norm on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:51:13 PM AEST
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Re: Till I've Lost You
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:44:12 PM AEST
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lovely
Shari |
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