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Happy Birthday Baby (Sallie's Day)
Contributed by
eyesrustedshut
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Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
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Its much too complex to write out how I feel
Your much too beautiful for the ordinary spiel
I've already crossed out half a dozen lines
I suppose its hardest to write the
poems which aren't from the mind
But they are more like feelings from the heart
And transforming them into sentences is
impossable when the words won't even start
Maybe I'll just tell you I love you
and you being my girl-friend
has been a dream come true
The pretty, clever lines just won't do
when all that I want to say is I love you
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eyesrustedshut
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2003-07-08 15:35:00]
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Re: Happy Birthday Baby (Sallie's Day)
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by norm on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:53:37 PM AEST
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| Your poem expresses a very sweet tribute |
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Re: Happy Birthday Baby (Sallie's Day)
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:45:48 PM AEST
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what you have said is more important than any pretty, clever line
I think you did just fine
Shari |
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