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Back to the Start
Contributed by
mygurl1989
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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please tell me u love me,
i've come back to haunt you.
oh what a start!
just put everything-
upon love's shoulders.
nothing will pull us apart.
of course that's what we thought.
now we know it's not.
now i guess we know better.
but it's all a lie.
just when it couldn't get worse,
we said goodbye.
why'd you have to go?
i can't do it alone.
i need you with me-
to help me grow.
maybe i'm obsessed;
up here sending-
mental telepathy.
or maybe i'm not;
maybe we're blessed,
we're just too blind to see.
maybe you were meant for me.
now i know,
this sounds stupind, but after everything;
we've been through so much.
i've grown.
grown to love you-
more and more each day.
in every single moment,
of every single time,
in every single way,
but now it's over,
and you're gone.
now i feel so alone,
no one said it would be easy.
it's such a shame for us to part.
no one said it would be this hard.
take me back to the start.
to the first time you sang.
oh, that beautiful song!
and now i'm to blame-
for doing you wrong.
i should had never said a thing.
you took me away,
to a better place,
in a better time,
where i could see your sweet face.
i wanted to talk,
to hear your gentle voice
just once more.
but then I had to walk-
far away from you,
to a different place;
a different time in space.
it's not your fault,
and its not mine.
you'll be ok,
and I'll be just fine.
i'm sorry i left.
but i know if i stayed
it wouldn't last.
my world has gone upside down.
it's all happened too fast.
ever since the end,
i can't find how to begin.
my whole life
and everyone around me-
it's just been so hectic;
everything's so crazy.
i found someone new.
i thought it was over.
but there is no getting over you.
you have got in my head
and now i can't get you out!
i used to think it was you-
who ripped my heart out
and left me here to bleed.
but i know it's not true.
i'm so sorry.
i can't beleive i ever doubted you.
no one said it was this hard.
please take me back to the start.
to that song,
the one of numbers and figures-
it explained everything.
take me back to the start:
to those nights,
full of what dreams are made of-
to when you were my someone to hold,
and i had somewhere to be.
i came up to meet you,
and now i tell you i'm sorry.
you don't know how wonderful you are.
you told me your secrets,
i asked my questions,
and finally got the answers.
"tell me you love me
come back to haunt me
oh, what a rush back to the start"
isn't that what you sang?
what ever happened,
to our hopes...
our dreams...our plans?
nothing can ever be the same
no one said it would be that hard
it was a shame for us to part
now i realize
i should have kissed you
i missed my chance
never again will we dance
and now i know why
you can't take me back to the start. "
Copyright ©
mygurl1989
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2003-07-08 15:05:00]
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Re: Back to the Start
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by rusty1980 on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:56:27 PM AEST
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| quite illuminating, little long but I like the entire theme!! |
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Re: Back to the Start
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by Metalmouth666 on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 01:23:39 PM AEST
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I LOVE this, this poem is very good, why you ask? because I have seen this kind of story in my life recently and you know me reading this, brought back memories, and like your title "Back to the start" thats what I wish I could do with the girl I love.
Great write again
~MetalMouth666 (Ryan) |
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Re: Back to the Start
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by mygurl1989 on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 11:42:13 PM AEST
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| hey thx alot !!! i really apriciate u comenting on this one bc no one usually does !!! this one of my very few love poems and i think it is my fav too !!! |
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Re: Back to the Start
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by Paddy on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:03:40 PM AEST
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| it's too long, but i'm no expert |
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