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I Watch You
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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I watch you grow,
Day by day,
I wonder if you know,
that mommy prays,
I watch you move,
with every step,
will I be able to prove,
the promises I kept,
I watch your eyes,
but at a glance,
do you realize,
I see you dance,
I watch your face change,
through the years,
It seems strange,
when I wipe your tears,
I hear you speak,
listining to every word,
even when my hearings weak,
I'll remember what I've heard,
Your growing up so fast,
It brings tears to my eyes,
those memories wont last,
they will soon just slip by,
It wont be long, when I grasp your hand,
they'll be bigger than mine,
then I'll be watching a man,
and the memories will be in my mind.
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LOWMAN613
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2003-07-08 11:05:00]
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Re: I Watch You
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by soul_je on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:23:23 AM AEST
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| You wrote here a wonderfully excellent touching poem. A mother's love is always forever true and ceaseless. Your children should be very proud to have a mother like you. I truly admire you. |
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Re: I Watch You
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:52:31 AM AEST
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wonderful
shari |
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Re: I Watch You
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:43:36 PM AEST
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An excellent write! Your kids are lucky to have such a caring and loving mother like you.
Saira |
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Re: I Watch You
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 06:11:59 AM AEST
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| Wow, christina.. this is excellent.. venkat |
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Re: I Watch You
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by shelby on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:32:04 AM AEST
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beautiful my friend
michelle |
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Re: I Watch You
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:18:58 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful |
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