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to becca
Contributed by
plous
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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with words what can i do,
how do i role them out to shine to you,
to speak truth or how i feel,
what things can i say that make it real,
what are you doing,
i want to know,
it irritates me so,
never knowing if you are o.k,
i want to be your friend,
and that way stay,
i dont want something to destroy talking to you,
not in any way,
but its dark,
and a cold day,
oh i wish you would just talk to me,
it could be all better,
we could just laugh,
and talk of weather,
without worries,
and no need for anyone to bleed,
i made a mistake,
it was all my fault,
i fell for you when i should not,
that could ruin a friendship,
something i wish not to stop,
i want the best for you,
i dont think this is me,
i dont want you to hurt,
this i want you to see,
but now she wont talk to me,
now i am just sad,
sitting here with memories of something i had,
if i had just kept my mouth shut,
or not meet you at all,
but that would be worse,
in some way,
i am confused myself,
without a person to help,
so i try as i may,
to put my emotions on a shelf,
but they never stay,
and when we would talk,
they would bother me and say hey,
crushing my soul like they still do today,
this is what i feel,
with only words i hope you see them as real,
i gave an apology,
with what i have,
i dont know what more i can give,
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Re: to becca
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by plous on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 10:37:49 AM AEST
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| i hope this one is more clear, or what not. and others who read this, please be nice to the person i am righting this to, she did nothing, i was my error. |
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Re: to becca
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 10:59:58 AM AEST
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sincere here I dont know whats going on but I hope this works out.
michelle |
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Re: to becca
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:10:39 AM AEST
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This is a lovely poem to Becca. I hope you
two work out your indifferences because
friendship is vital in todays society!
Good luck!
Angel always...godspeed....joni |
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Re: to becca
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:27:02 AM AEST
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Awww Chris this is sweet as always, your apology i accept at great lengths, i do...but there are some things i have to deal with before i can take anything else on.
- Becca |
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Re: to becca
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 11:50:26 AM AEST
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heartfelt apology for sure, hope all works out for you two
Shari |
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Re: to becca
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:55:24 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful in its honesty... hope you two can work it out. :) |
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Re: to becca
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:00:37 PM AEST
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| dearest chris, so very sincere, you know i wish you both the very best happiness, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: to becca
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 04:49:48 PM AEST
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Beautifully sincere..All the best to you two...
Jenni |
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