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I sing
Contributed by
Lele
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I try to sing.
To sing the love.
I try to sing
for finding something that make love.
Love in this confused live.
Love in this confused mind
that only see madness, sadness and pain
in the world (for me) very strange.
Because it, I sing.
To sing for taking out my sadness.
To sing for taking out my madness.
I sing, always,
all the time, nowhere.
I sing, always,
all the time, everywhere.
For people,
I sing for showing.
For showing my stupid feelings
in this world.
Copyright ©
Lele
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2003-07-08 09:05:00]
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Re: I sing
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by norm on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 10:34:41 AM AEST
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Your poem is well taken...
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A person sings the song of life
dispelling evil, death and strife,
The things your told with shameful hype
Makes the song eraser-type.
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Re: I sing
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by Lele on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:14:42 PM AEST
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| Thank you, Norman. I myself felt some insecure about the words ( that are very simples), and their repeations ( that did very much). |
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