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It Happened Last Night
Contributed by
undead_poet14
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Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I didn’t think it could happen to me
I thought I’d done everything right
But then…
Why did this still happen?
I’ll never be the same person I was before
I’ve lost something I can never get back
How could he have done it?
Did he hate me that much?
What will my friends and family do?
I hope they won’t hate me too
It’s not my fault but I still wonder
Why did it have to happen to me?
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2003-07-08 08:35:00]
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Re: It Happened Last Night
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 09:14:51 AM AEST
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Sad but a good write!
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Re: It Happened Last Night
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by norm on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 10:41:25 AM AEST
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Your poem builds suspense very well..
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Here's something I always knew,
If a thing can happen,
It can happen to you.
Work it out and don't be afraid
It's just a mistake
that everyone made...
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Re: It Happened Last Night
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 02:55:18 PM AEST
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i know how you feel....great write!
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: It Happened Last Night
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 04:24:55 PM AEST
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Good write..hope all is well..
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