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Glinting Knife
Contributed by
lostforgood
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Shining knife
Oh so bright
Glinting slightly in the light
Come to take this horrid life
Press against the tender skin
Leave your mark long and deep
Let the blood start to seep
Forget that this is such a sin
Now it's time to cover up
Put a smile on this face
Walk about without a phase
This mind you've affected is a lot more tough
Copyright ©
lostforgood
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2003-07-08 04:05:00]
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Re: Glinting Knife
(User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 09:23:38 AM AEST
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It's a very good write. I liked it!
Saira |
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Re: Glinting Knife
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:37:04 PM AEST
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| LOVED your poem. It was really awsome! I like shiney things, so i was especially drawn to the title, ooooooo......... sorry, anyways, wonderful write. Hope to hear more from you! |
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