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Reap in Grim Euphoria
Contributed by
Jilly
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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He is dark…
Undiscovered….
Intriguing …
He is your morbid fantasy…
He can deliver you to the brink of euphoria
With the intricacies of his mind
He can place you on a pedestal
With each tantalizing phrase
He will pierce your heart
With charm and devilish good looks
He has you…
You have become a soul with but one desire…
To serve him…
To kneel at his long black cloak
Begging for his affection
He has you…
As you light the black candles of confusion
To escape his trance
He enters your darkness
Wraps his arm around your waist
You tremble with fear and anticipation….
He has you…
You crave his coldness
Desire his macabre touch
He is wondrous evil
Baneful glory
He has you…
He has his scythe at your throat…
Copyright ©
Jilly
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2003-07-08 03:35:00]
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Re: Reap in Grim Euphoria
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by punkwthn on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:21:48 AM AEST
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| Amazing poem. Brilliantly done!! The imagery is so vivid one feels like they are there. I love this poem! |
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Re: Reap in Grim Euphoria
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by vincy on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 09:03:06 AM AEST
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You did it Jilly, got my fingers on my throat
chills on my back and a cold sweat.
Almost like a vampire with scythe for teeth
this is as thrilling as dark poetry can get
excellent work. |
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Re: Reap in Grim Euphoria
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by Fiona on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 05:41:14 AM AEST
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I love this poem! Mainly because I am just evil, but whatever !! Hehe.
Love ya sista |
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