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Darkness of a Broken Mind

Contributed by blackfire9786 on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Fear lifts inside me
My heart pounding in my chest
I think I’m going crazy
Can’t go on living like this.

Retreating faces, in the dark
Moving shadows through my head
Hearing voices echo through the night
As I lay here in my bed

Rattling doors, banging on the wall
These sounds penetrating into my soul
My mind is breaking, I’m starting to fall
My carefully guarded life is spinning out of control.

Losing myself in empty thoughts
Trying to fill an empty heart
Hiding alone, my breath short and fast
Hiding from the enemies that haunt me from my past

I fear I’m really losing my mind
What would my family do?
If anyone could see in, what would they find?
Would my insanity prove true?

Life’s an endless cycle
The sun sets and rises
At night I’m faced with my true self
At day hidden with many disguises

So welcome to my life
Where demons lurk and voices sound
Where pain can drive the mind to break
And light is never found.




Copyright © blackfire9786 ... [ 2003-07-08 02:05:00]
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Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:13:14 AM AEST
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another great poem..suprise suprise! lol. i could read this one a thousand times over...great job lis.

Your Twin,

~*riki lynn*~


Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinlimbo on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:44:44 AM AEST
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Very good writing. Intense and dark, I really enjoyed it.


Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:48:19 AM AEST
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good write, you express yourself very well
Shari


Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:12:52 AM AEST
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i really like this, everything flows so well it was over to soon. you and your twin do so well. take care of each other. you both have a fan! good job, Crow


Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 09:34:16 AM AEST
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Wow... what a dark write. I really loved it! The title is simply amazing and fits to a T.
Saira


Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:28:49 PM AEST
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this is beautiful lisa...
x_x_x


Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 11:51:49 PM AEST
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well done, great images:) hugs n' love nessa




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