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Final Vein
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I try not to, but I can’t help but complain
When all I feel, every day, is pain
I want to let it go, want it all to drain
I need to cut my final vein
Every day is a mirror of the day before
I can’t seem to find my way to the door
Of happiness, I have to remain a whore
My rich soul is becoming so poor
My decided death is drawing so near
And even of that, I have no fear
Down my cheek trickles a single tear
As I wish with all my heart to no longer be here
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2003-07-08 01:05:00]
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Re: Final Vein
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:25:13 AM AEST
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this made me cry
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Re: Final Vein
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:45:06 AM AEST
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i think life can get unbearable, and i think its a beautiful fight. live every breath, fight!
very good poem, Crow |
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Re: Final Vein
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by lostinlimbo on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:48:20 AM AEST
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| I've been where you and have in fact written about it, which helps me. I hope you writing this helped you. |
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Re: Final Vein
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:54:02 AM AEST
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you have much talent, do you really think that death would end the pain? What if you take that pain with you to eternity? i have been there but always seem to find a reason to stay. i also have found that the pain eventually goes away.
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Re: Final Vein
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by M on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:15:08 PM AEST
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Don't let go, Charlotte. I'm sorry if I seem like I don't care sometimes, I do, I promise. Just don't give up on all you have, you don't need to.
Love and hope,
EmilyxXx |
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Re: Final Vein
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:25:24 PM AEST
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| how easy it sometimes seems to throw it all away. A few seconds of pain and it is all gone... what's a few more minutes compared to a life of pain? Well believe me, giving up is not the answer. Caving in just let's them win.... stand up and fight for yourself... even if it's you you are fighting. You are woth more then a simple blade to the vein.... you are worth more then empty dreams.... find yourself and what makes you happy.... find your crutch and don't be afraid to lean on it. Bless you. |
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