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If There Is Tenderness
Contributed by
dafremen
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Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
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If There Is Tenderness
R. Dafremen
If there is sweetness
That behind the practiced edge of your indifference
Lingers pennywish-like, wistfully behind
Hint of this to me
A simple subtle tenderness
Whisper-kissed and left between the lines
Matchless prize for one inclined
To chance a meeting in your eyes
Don't be suprised if you should find me
In the saddest parts
Where I almost feel you
I can almost taste your fragrance
Nestled on my lips
A phantom sip drops as a kiss
Almost there in wishful wanderings
A glimpse into your heart is what I've never had
A passing glance is all I'd ask of you
For mine beats true
Times its rythmn to foreverness
Finds purpose in togetherness
Anticipates, awaits
Some sort of hopeful sign from you.
Copyright ©
dafremen
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2003-07-08 00:05:00]
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Re: If There Is Tenderness
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:16:57 AM AEST
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| Oh .. my ... this is just extraordinarily beautiful ... exquisite .... Jan |
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Re: If There Is Tenderness
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:42:44 AM AEST
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Just wonderful!!
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Re: If There Is Tenderness
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:23:26 AM AEST
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breathtaking!! i was lost in this poem.
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Re: If There Is Tenderness
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:00:03 AM AEST
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exquisite, beautiful
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Re: If There Is Tenderness
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:35:55 AM AEST
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| Yea, this is extraordinarily beautiful.." I can almost taste its fragrance nestled in its beautiful lines. Dear Dafremen.. I have seen your translation for Good_Kings Lutto, that is fine..thank you.. venkat |
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Re: If There Is Tenderness
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:39:19 AM AEST
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| So very tender...I was mesmerised by the sweet fragrance .. |
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Re: If There Is Tenderness
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 06:01:01 AM AEST
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| lol..venkat..so we both experienced the fragrance of this write..Didnt see your comment until I posted mine..We read with different eyes,yet both see the sense the same beauty ;) |
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Re: If There Is Tenderness
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by dafremen on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 12:18:28 AM AEST
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Thank you all so much for your wonderful words. There are some who are born with less ambition than others. Some of us are motivated by encouraging words, without which we feel no real fire in our hearts. Your words have lit a fire under mine.
Thanks again,
Daf |
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