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Dear Diary
Contributed by
YOURENOTWELCOME
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Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
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Nobody would expect it from me
The quiet kid in the back of the class
The kid nobody wanted to see
He's harmless they thought
They didn't know
The thoughts in my mind would just grow and grow
Looking back on that day, I don't regret what I did
I laughed the second I saw the first kid
Running, Screaming for his life
Couldn't scream anymore slit his throat with the knife
The other kids ran, but just a bit too slow
The thoughts in my head continued to grow
The constant taunting and insults had gotten to me
Now they will know what it's like to be me
They pushed me over the edge, now look what I've done
Another one down from the smoking barrel of my gun
As they glanced at me in shock, blood splattered on my face
I couldn't take it, just wanted to leave this place
Let them live or take my own life
Couldn't face all the misery and strife
Had I spared just 1 of them, I would've thought I failed
Killing them is worth the time in jail
If I could do it again, I know I would
But for now, I'm feeling REALLY good.
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Re: Dear Diary
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 07:57:24 PM AEST
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this was well written, but those are thoughts better left on paper than acted upon
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Re: Dear Diary
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:36:23 AM AEST
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Shari pretty much said it all in her above comment.
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Re: Dear Diary
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by aniT on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 10:35:17 PM AEST
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| I agree with them. Your poem is nicely written and to tell the truth some of those kind of thoughts have entered my mind more than once, but it cant be acted upon. Continue to put those thoughts on paper. You're good at it. |
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