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Reflect On You (Lemonade)
Contributed by
dafremen
on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You fantasy
You lemonade
You cool collage
Who fathomed my
Hypocrisy
That everything is you because
The way you think
The way you are
You're everything
It's you because
You heal my soul
Incorrigible
Intangible
The revery
The you-with-me forevery
And everything's a you montage
No common sense absurdity
You hurting me
For nothing
Just for you because
Because nothing's the same
Without your memory
Or your name
With my early breath
The very lips upon my face
To breath your name
If it's all the same
I'll breath it now
Reflect on you because
Because you're almost everything because
A solid smack of fate
Dealt us the hand of love
And I'll be damned alot
If it ain't all I'd care to give
To be with you
To do anything because
The matter's well in hand
Kinda hoped you'd understand
The sort of me that longs for you
Just about every day
And here I am because
It matters a whole lot
Just thought you'd like to know because
You always helped to lift me up
You built my strength
Restored my soul
Helped a fire rekindled
Wrap its flames around me
Felt like everything
Especially you
Enticing me because
It's everything within you
That means the world to me.
Copyright ©
dafremen
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2003-07-07 16:05:00]
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Re: Reflect On You (Lemonade)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:33:55 PM AEST
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Well written! Fun to read and extremely "felt".
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Re: Reflect On You (Lemonade)
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 09:33:58 PM AEST
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wow this flows and intriques me.
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Re: Reflect On You (Lemonade)
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 11:10:20 PM AEST
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This is thoroughly amazing!! "forevery" - nice word you made up there, lol. It actually flowed very well! Wonderful write!
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Re: Reflect On You (Lemonade)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:33:29 AM AEST
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Welcome to yodc... lovely write..
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