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Beaten down
Contributed by
desertwispers
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Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Forever in the cell of the hollow dark cold heart
beaten by the man she loved pushed and shoved.
Nothing to cover the pain inside crystal tears
alone she cried he denied the acts and lied.
Death would become the moments of time
to release the torture and tormented minds.
Pounding head and broken heart in time forever
she wished to depart.
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2003-07-07 12:05:00]
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Re: Beaten down
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by vincy on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:39:54 PM AEST
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Love makes a person vulnerable
because an open heart can take much abuse
such betrayal and cruelty is a deadly combination
getting away from it is the only sensible thing to do
but one also can think of getting satisfaction
by turning the loved one into a damned thing. |
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Re: Beaten down
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:53:15 PM AEST
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Your writing is great much talent shown, to get out takes strength but it is better than to suffer so
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Re: Beaten down
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 08:27:52 PM AEST
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good work, once someone kicks you and you don`t bite them back, they just keep kicking.
be safe. Crow |
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Re: Beaten down
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 09:48:04 PM AEST
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oh you got me with this one.Been there done that but you already know these things. Talk at ya later, keep writing it out.
ttul
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