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Petals fall
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
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Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The petals fall
from the sweet fragrant flowers
and flow into the breezey wind
Journeying far and wide
into the unknown world of life
Wandering, falling into the sky
Taking a journey into life
Only taking it once before
life is crumbled into ashes of dust
and death.
Copyright ©
youngpoet1989
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2003-07-07 11:05:00]
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Re: Petals fall
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:59:02 PM AEST
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well written
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Re: Petals fall
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 09:41:31 PM AEST
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beautiful images I can see the petals falling and floating away.
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