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The Blackness
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 06:37:20 AM in AEST
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Night after night
I lay back in my bed
I don't know what to do
So my eyes go puffy and red
The blackness surrounds me
Comforting my mind
I want to give in
But still I hide
How long has it been here
Comfortably grazing my face
But I put it away
For it's a disgrace
I still live my life now
I put on a mask
Happy and carefree
So nobody asks
But night after night
I lay back in my bed
I don't know what to do
So my eyes go puffy and red.
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Re: The Blackness
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 05:56:32 PM AEST
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Hey it's me Dee...I love this poem! And I'm really glad you decided to keep posting here. You'll get used to the new site, don't worry!
~ Dee :) |
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Re: The Blackness
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 06:49:45 PM AEST
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Wow, i love this poem, you truely are great
Your a lot better at poetry than me, so you cannot argue.
Sorry but i always get the last word
Bec |
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Re: The Blackness
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by randumbchit on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 01:17:15 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem its so easy to relate too for me |
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