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Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Death by suicide
the way that many tried
just to make them justified
fulfilling dreams that God implied
excaping thoughts He trapped inside
theres no holding back what He has in mind
grabs the gun theres no faith to find
this is what your God demised

Is this what He planned for me
Is this the way it was meant to be
Will your God get the best of me
Why does He set the best men free
Why is God the death of me
Look at what Hes done you see
Brainwashed everyone of you and me
Death is our only destiny

Death by suicide
the way that many died
and on God they still relied
but Hes the One that stole their pride
now to heaven they've been deprived
denying access once they've arrived
even though He created their mind
He gave them death but their still denied







Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-07-07 02:05:00]
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Re: Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:33:46 AM AEST
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your poem is well written, the the choice is mans not Gods, he did not deny the man the man denied him

Shari


Re: Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:34:25 PM AEST
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But did God not create the thought. if not then what does He create. Nothing He is unreal
a figment of your Imagination. that you let yourself believe. And your also letting yourself down. In the end there will be none.
SS is JF


Re: Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:54:02 PM AEST
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an interesting perspective, it was well written, but i think im too athiest to agree with you or disagree with ytou on blaming a god.... anyways great write ~Apryl


Re: Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 09:09:03 AM AEST
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As an athiest, you do not know who to believe
in. I guess I feel the same. If you would like you can believe in me I am real and I wont want your soul unlike any other god people
may choose. Or you could believe in yourself
thats the point Im trying to get across anyways
Why waste your life around a supposed God thank you for the support
SS is JF


Re: Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:24:29 PM AEST
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That's a good point..... as are the ones in your comments. So now that you've heard from a believer and a non-believer, let's give this a try... I'm pagan, so even if I kill myself, the goddess would welcome me with open arms into her kingdom and start setting me up for my next life......

Great poem, and it explains the reasons I left my mother's God in the first place....

*J*


Re: Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 06:31:30 PM AEST
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Pagan, Im not keen on that religion Im going to have to check that out But untill then I beleive in me Jesus the Suicidal Son
(in case your wondering everybody says I look just like him, and actually I really do it makes me laugh)


Re: Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 01:01:21 PM AEST
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"We are not human beings having a spiritual experience. We are spiritual beings having a human experience." ---Pierre Teilhard de Chardin
Makes me think what about you?
Great write no matter what you may believe in..


Re: Death by Suicide, its Gods Choice, but still unjustified (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 06:58:07 AM AEST
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I woud like to know what it makes you think about me
Dont be mad because I feel more free than you could ever imagine I have no rules or boundries and if I did I could break them all and still not care Now What




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