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you are my life's core
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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never meant to hurt you, nor desert you
my fears were uncool, and me just the fool
you've unlocked my heart, holding the biggest part
for when you set me free, i found life off-key
you did not kick and scream, you let me go on and dream
i thought life not a waste, in my moment of haste
that day haunted me, although i found happiness in thee
there was no one to genuinely hold me, i had bought and sold me
wishing my soul had sooner seen the light, our love so right
so now i come to you after time, has passed in many a rhyme
so much for this second chance i am grateful, heart full
i admitt i was wrong, you have loved me all along
thank you for believing in me, caring and letting me be free
allowing me to be the fool, arms open coming back to you
because of these feelings for you, this time i want to see us through
our spark has turned to flame, someday i may hold your name
you have always been there for me, even as a friend helped me see
warmly cuddling we'd now have been, you know you make my heart sing
your voice is sweet music to my ears, and now our song is crystal clear
there are no more words, always my heart you've heard
life is no longer a metaphor.................for....you are my life's core
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
~:*true, i love you*:~
xxxxxxxxxxxx
~:*|*:~
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Re: you are my life's core
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:51:17 AM AEST
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| This is such a beautiful write Nessa ... so filled with love .... I wish you every happiness ... hugs Jan |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:00:12 AM AEST
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love sweet love beautiful
michelle |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:47:44 AM AEST
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That's just about the prettiest thing I've ever seen!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by venkat on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:11:11 AM AEST
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| very sweet a true love song.. venkat |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:42:13 AM AEST
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so very loving my friend I wish you much happiness
Shari |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:36:57 PM AEST
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| that was amazing! one of the best I've read in awhile, great job! =) |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by Dr_Calm on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:03:00 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn,
This is a beautiful piece. So nicely done! By not stretching or deliberately reaching for an emotional reaction, you more than make the reader feel your emotions.
Wonderful.
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Re: you are my life's core
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 07:01:57 PM AEST
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Aww wow this is truly amazing nessa, perfect flow, written very well and stunningly beautiful!
- Becca |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 07:55:10 PM AEST
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| wonderful write, the best to you. Crow |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 07:32:51 AM AEST
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Very beautifully done!
Saira |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by Bongo on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 11:26:28 AM AEST
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Your change of heart
A temporary setback
Caring contact although apart
Makes for a stronger comeback
xxxxxxx |
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Re: you are my life's core
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:56:18 AM AEST
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| so wonderful and beautiful... makes my heart sing... ;-) |
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