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Sorrow's Butler.
Contributed by
kay-p-m-devenish
on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There is a butler in Sorrow's house,
he opens and closes its doors,
and I've passed him
through my 'ins' and 'outs',
and his face looked
just...
like yours.
p.s.
this poem is about my ex.
Copyright ©
kay-p-m-devenish
... [
2003-07-06 20:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sorrow's Butler.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:59:27 PM AEST (User
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good
Shari
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Re: Sorrow's Butler.
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:47:53 AM AEST (User
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Well said ... good write.. Jan |
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Re: Sorrow's Butler.
(User Rating: 1 ) by kangarose on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 05:58:24 AM AEST (User
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lovely write Kay as always.
chrissy |
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Re: Sorrow's Butler.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 02:02:43 PM AEST (User
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this is very good, has me wanting more. Crow |
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Re: Sorrow's Butler.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:22:56 PM AEST (User
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Thank you for your comment on my poem Sorrow's butler.
Best wishes always from
Kay. |
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Re: Sorrow's Butler.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 10:45:41 PM AEST (User
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short good and to the point |
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