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You
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Once again I sit here in my room,
thinking about only you.
I'm wondering what you're doing,
wishing I were there with you.
Every day it's you that is on my mind,
every night you are the one in my dreams.
Sometimes I can't think of anything but you,
you have always been the one for me, so it seems.
As I sit upon my bed thinking of you,
I wonder do you ever just sit and think of me.
Am I always no your mind,
or is that just my fantasy.
One of these days;
I'll tell you just how I feel.
My feelings for you are,
deep, strong, and so very real.
Here again I sit in my room,
thinking about me and you.
About the day when I finally,
tell you how much I love you.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2003-07-06 18:35:00]
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Re: You
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:31:01 PM AEST
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very well written I liked this very much
Shari |
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Re: You
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by Trisha on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:49:10 PM AEST
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| WOW THIS IS GOOD |
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Re: You
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:56:47 AM AEST
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| I love this poem ... well written ... Jan |
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Re: You
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by Suzy on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:40:11 AM AEST
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Lovely write..one day you'll find the strength to tell them just how much you love them...
Lasca |
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Re: You
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 02:44:55 AM AEST
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| very good write, and heartwarming, you better tell him! Crow |
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Re: You
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 01:14:31 PM AEST
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'You' is a lucky fella Candice,
I'm sure he does also think of you!
And even if you find out otherwise you can still your fantasy can't you. But just imagine how it'll feel when it becomes reality.
Excellent heartfelt write Candice, keep 'em coming
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: You
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 11:53:55 PM AEST
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Dean, I'm glad that you like this one. And I know that you can guess who this is written about.
ShadowsCloud |
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