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HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HER?
Contributed by
Del
on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There's someone waiting just for you,
Somewhere beneath this starry sky.
You left her so very suddenly,
She still keeps wondering why.
She thinks of you constantly,
Dreams of you every night.
'Please come back to me,' she begs,
And make everything all right.
She remembers all the tender kisses,
On her lips and everywhere.
How could you love her so passionately,
And now pretend you just don't care?
She never will forget you,
She never will be free.
I know this so very sincerely.
Because this love sick girl is me.
Copyright ©
Del
... [
2003-07-06 16:35:00]
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Re: HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HER?
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:45:28 PM AEST
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Sad but very good write, good flow
Shari |
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Re: HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HER?
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:55:43 PM AEST
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just reading along so well, thinking it to be a friend, and it was you. i like the ending
good work. Crow |
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Re: HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HER?
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 01:02:49 AM AEST
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lovely flowing write
michelle |
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Re: HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HER?
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by northernlights on
Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 03:02:59 AM AEST
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| What a lovely sincere heartfelt write of love lost and the continual yearning for answers, |
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