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Burden
Contributed by
Crow
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Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
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Has love taken its final toll
on a heart you have given freely.
Is love to be discarded
a burden of bitter thought.
You can`t help but wonder.
I will hope for one more chance
to be held forever,
to be loved like no other.
Its not vacant,
love will open and live again,
with sun rises
to fold back each pedal till bloom. Crow
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Crow
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2003-07-06 13:35:00]
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Re: Burden
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by norm on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:46:26 PM AEST
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| Itg is a beutiful thought and poem |
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Re: Burden
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by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:49:40 PM AEST
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beautiful beautiful poem. i love it. write more!
Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: Burden
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:30:17 PM AEST
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I really liked the last verse
Wonderfully done
Shari |
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Re: Burden
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by shelby on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:07:41 PM AEST
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wonderful write (love will open and live again) lovely
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Re: Burden
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by Saira on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:13:56 PM AEST
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It's wonderful. Short but meaningful. Good work!
Saira |
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Re: Burden
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by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:44:56 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem! I liked this very much, very beautiful. (the above comment from blackfire9786 was my twin, Riki, whose screenname is Wild_heart_of_fire, she was just usin my sn) |
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Re: Burden
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by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:45:19 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem! I liked this very much, very beautiful. (the above comment from blackfire9786 was my twin, Riki, whose screenname is Wild_heart_of_fire, she was just usin my sn)
Lisa |
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Re: Burden
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:21:39 PM AEST
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| Hope!!! A wonderful feeling and even better when you can pass this feeling along...Yes!! Inspirational :) |
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Re: Burden
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:29:09 PM AEST
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| beautiful:) |
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Re: Burden
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:38:44 PM AEST
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thank you, i`m starting with small poems
until i gain a little more confidence. Crow |
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Re: Burden
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:43:10 PM AEST
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| thank you, i hope to improve in time. |
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Re: Burden
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:52:40 PM AEST
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thank you, that was the bright spot for me too
Crow |
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Re: Burden
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:56:16 PM AEST
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| as i learn the poems should grow a bit. and hopefully improve. thank you for taking the time. Crow |
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Re: Burden
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 11:59:27 PM AEST
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twins for real? and your both poets and writers. thats great. i`m confused already.
thank you for the kind words Crow. |
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Re: Burden
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:03:19 AM AEST
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| so true, sometimes one little thing i read can help me through. thank you, Crow |
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Re: Burden
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:05:02 AM AEST
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| thank you , i hope to improve. Crow |
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Re: Burden
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:09:48 AM AEST
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This poem is absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed reading it.
ShadowsCloud |
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