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Your father
Contributed by
calbob
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Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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First step through the door
You wait for the smell to pass
The most interesting thing besides the floor
Is the branching crack along the glass
You used to think that he had died
And this thought wasnt so bad
But now you see that you have lied
And he's the same father you've always had
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calbob
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2003-07-06 12:35:00]
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Re: Your father
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by norm on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:15:07 PM AEST
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Your poem is fine...the content too
it's just a shame, it happens to you... |
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Re: Your father
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by Crow on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:41:59 PM AEST
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i wish things better for you both, good poem.
it does not take much to say a lot. Crow |
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Re: Your father
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by joydeep_nath on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 10:10:46 AM AEST
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hi,
nice thoughts nice poem but it could have been longer.... |
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Re: Your father
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by TheGrim on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 07:19:18 AM AEST
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| This was written well. Nice rhythm |
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