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Contributed by Alisialynn on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Friend, Dear Brilliant semi charming friend.
When you are gone I am empty and listless, I fear the day will come when you will leave me forever and I will be forced to admit my lack of anything
Special.

Do not go but, stay and make yourself welcome.
Do not go but, stay and make me feel more.

Stay and work for me. Do not go but,
Stay and make me feel wanted. Do not go but,

I swear the whole world is mine and that you are always never talking anymore. They talk and I am constant in this feeling but, I dare not express it in fear it leaves me and I am not able to fully
Feel anything like it
ever again.

It's quite unlike the shelving that lines my walls they are bare and the books lay out everywhere,
Hard to find
and completely brilliant with their mysterious printed words.
More so it is like the encyclopedia section of a library,
once in a great while someone will come to my section and take me
down
and look at me for awhile only to get bored and replace me never to return.

That I dare say my chaotic, disorganized apartment is better than a library is falsehood, I am merely stating the only metaphor I could come up with.
And that in itself is all the proof I need that I am without a creative bone in my body, I am completely lacking of personality and therefore am shunned by anybody worthwhile and interesting.

Leave me to my losers, my mindless and all of these I will be. I have only one famously witty, intelligent, beautiful friend and that friend leaves me now empty and useless.
My mind is a trap, don't be stuck in it.

Bare with me that my own mind has abandoned me.
Goodbye forever that knack I once almost had.
Goodbye forever a chance at a normal life.

Forever and always alone,
ALH

Copyright © Alisialynn ... [ 2003-07-06 12:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:34:53 PM AEST
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o`no! your so down on yourself, it makes me sad. good write. Crow

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