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When Lovers Rest
Contributed by
eyesrustedshut
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Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can barely breathe this time
We've kissed so long my lips are dry
And when you take my breath away
These trembling lips have nothing to say
Then my finger-tips like infantry
Storm the curves of your restless body
Laying your fragile head back
This soldier brigade goes on the attack
Kissing till our lips grow weak
Wrapped in arms we fall asleep
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2003-07-06 09:05:00]
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Re: When Lovers Rest
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:52:35 AM AEST
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This is yum :)..
"Then my finger-tips like infantry
Storm the curves of your restless body" Love these lines... |
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Re: When Lovers Rest
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by norm on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 10:24:14 AM AEST
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You girls write a 'Downdeep' poem'
we guys can't write like that! |
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Re: When Lovers Rest
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:22:02 PM AEST
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I really really liked this one
Shari |
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Re: When Lovers Rest
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 07:34:38 PM AEST
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very beautiful, and i don`t think men can write
that sensitive either. Crow |
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